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Aberdeen by ~emosewa:iconemosewa:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Lyrical


And he says
'Aberdeen, you are my
Beauty queen
But you are forever stuck
In my magazine'
Oh he screams
'Aberdeen
Come be my
Beauty queen
I'll peel you off the page
In this magazine
So you can
Be forever mine
Be forever mine
Oh oh oh Aberdeen
Won't you
Be forever mine
Be forever mine'
©2004-2010 ~emosewa
:iconemosewa:

Author's Comments

coming home from somewhere one day we passed a sign that said "aberdeen resort"...i think it's actually a nursing home....but i absolutly couldnt get the word aberdeen out of my head..i love the way the word flows off my tongue...its wonderful. this isnt quite finished...but its somethin im working on...

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~darkautumnight Mar 15, 2004, 5:19:12 PM
I like it...its a neat idea...keep workin on it. ;}

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:iconglass-eater:
*glass-eater Mar 16, 2004, 4:36:03 PM
again, sounds like some lyrics, and I admit Aberdeen would be a great name :D

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~emosewa Mar 20, 2004, 7:44:52 PM
thanks babes :)
yea...most stuff i write comes along with a tune...you can call em lyrics...but i dont like to consider myself that talented :P heh...

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"in your eyes i see a darkness that torments you, and in your head where it dwells. i'd give you my hand if youd reach out and grab it. lets walk away from this hell"
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`BurlapZack May 19, 2004, 9:55:39 AM
that is a fun word... this poem gets stuck in my head like a catchy song.
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~emosewa May 19, 2004, 6:30:29 PM
lol, thats what i was going for :)
the little guitar part i came up with for it gets stuck in my head :P
thanks for the comment :hug:

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"in your eyes i see a darkness that torments you, and in your head where it dwells. i'd give you my hand if youd reach out and grab it. lets walk away from this hell"
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~Pure-Dax Apr 10, 2005, 7:23:27 PM
great dev :)

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~Rinoa11 Nov 24, 2006, 5:41:27 PM
I live in Aberdeen City!

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Ouch I have lost myself again
Lost myself and I am nowhere to be found,
Yeah I think that I might break
I've lost myself again and I feel unsafe
:icongoodnight-girl:
~Goodnight-Girl Nov 1, 2007, 7:52:14 AM
i live in aberdeen too, and <3 this :)
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~beautifuldisaster224 Feb 26, 2008, 3:40:02 PM
i live in aberdeen in scotland!! :)

i love the poem! very nice

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~i didnt mean to fall in love but i did...and you didnt mean to love me back but i know you did ~
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